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So I've red-penned the first fifteen chapters of Grass King. I think it'll do. I hope so. I think I like it.
The first 50 pages in ms (single spaced) include an earth tremor, a magical bargain, a riot, a zonbie, and a dust-storm. Is that exciting enough, do you think?

Very ded now.

Skirt of the day: long blue cotton.

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I hope it's exciting enough. There's also a lot of character introduction in there, and scene changes (from the city to a barren steppe) so I hope it isn't too odd.