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la_marquise ([personal profile] la_marquise) wrote2012-03-26 06:23 pm

Time for some metrics

"There was fear here, rooted deep in the thin soil, thrumming through the limbs of the trees, climbing the house and stable brick by crumbling brick. It twined around Madame’s night-time dreams, so that she shook and cried out in her sleep. Its coils swathed Mado the maid, honing the edge on her voice and the resentment in her heart. It ran through Remi de Faumont’s veins, dripped from his tongue. Inside, it coated every wall, lurked in corners and under furnishings, hung from the ceilings in dusty festoons to mock the inhabitants. It was immanent in every breath, bitter as vinegar. In human terms it was old, this fear, born in some long ago rage and nurtured, night by day, in isolation and confusion and anxiety."

GK 2 proceeds apace: 1045 new words today. There are riots in the city and private madness in the big house.

Skirt of the day: long silky burgundy.

[identity profile] woolymonkey.livejournal.com 2012-03-26 05:29 pm (UTC)(link)
I like that a lot! Very creepy indeed. You wouldn't be channelling last night at the Monkey House by any chance, would you? ;-)

[identity profile] sartorias.livejournal.com 2012-03-26 06:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Mmmmmmmmmm.....

[identity profile] mevennen.livejournal.com 2012-03-26 07:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Excellent! :-)

[identity profile] history-monk.livejournal.com 2012-03-26 07:16 pm (UTC)(link)
Those words are doing their job nicely. It's nice to see some co-operating.

[identity profile] dancinghorse.livejournal.com 2012-03-26 07:25 pm (UTC)(link)
It sounds like a long silky burgundy book. Love that kind of book. :)

[identity profile] girlycomic.livejournal.com 2012-03-26 07:36 pm (UTC)(link)
Lovely passage.

[identity profile] aliettedb.livejournal.com 2012-03-26 08:24 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, love this. Love the sense of magic and mystery wrapped up in atmosphere (also, French names! :=) )

[identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/la_marquise_de_/ 2012-03-27 10:32 am (UTC)(link)
Merci, Aliette.

[identity profile] aberwyn.livejournal.com 2012-03-26 09:09 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm really looking forward to this one. I'm not at all surprised there are riots!

[identity profile] anef.livejournal.com 2012-03-26 09:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Very nice - I'm looking forward to reading it.
Edited 2012-03-26 21:54 (UTC)

[identity profile] ex-triciasu.livejournal.com 2012-03-27 05:44 am (UTC)(link)
Searching for the right superlative here. That's a fine piece of writing.

[identity profile] anna-wing.livejournal.com 2012-03-27 06:23 am (UTC)(link)
Nice. Rather Lovecraftian. Will there be gibbering?

[identity profile] zaan.livejournal.com 2012-03-27 08:19 am (UTC)(link)
Moar! Moar! To quote Icanhazcheezeburger....

[identity profile] cmcmck.livejournal.com 2012-03-27 01:36 pm (UTC)(link)
Sounds like a lot more fun than the ghastlier bits of the Thirty Years' War which are my lot at present!