ext_12938 ([identity profile] armb.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] la_marquise 2011-03-16 11:08 pm (UTC)

I too think hints and allusions to things explained later can be better than explaining everything in full when it's first mentioned. (Yes, over-simplified false dilemma, I know, you can explain some more without resorting to crude infodumping of everything.)

But your editor has more context than we have here, and more presumably experience in these matters, so if you think she's probably right in this instance, fair enough.

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