la_marquise: (Marquise)
la_marquise ([personal profile] la_marquise) wrote2009-12-04 07:16 pm

Bother.

Working my way through Grass King, I'm finding I like it more than I expected, though it's early days yet (I'm in the middle of ch, 4). But:
it needs another chapter at the end. I've had a sneaking niggle it might, but rereading the early section I realise more and more that there's a major strand I need to address and haven't. I am so bad at endings. (Living With Ghosts lacked a proper last chapter for the first 12 years of its existence. I suppose the realisation about Grass King shows some kind of progress in the writing craft. But I wish I'd remembered to write the blasted thing in the first draft.)
And like LWG, Grass King has trailing ends that I may end up writing about later. I did not ever set out to write series, blast it. But the characters have their own ideas.
Skirt of the day: long blue linen.

[identity profile] aberwyn.livejournal.com 2009-12-04 09:16 pm (UTC)(link)
Alas, I know about those uppity characters all too well!

On the positive side, however, when the characters take over the material is generally very good.

[identity profile] kateelliott.livejournal.com 2009-12-04 11:38 pm (UTC)(link)
The Stages of Writing:

Stage One: Coolest idea ever!

Stage Two: So excited, if only I could gt this opening to work.

Stage Three: Writing

Stage Four: Despair.

Stage Five: Well, at least it is finished.

Stage Six: Oh. Wait. Upon reread for revisions, am liking it more than I expected.

and so on
(we can come up with better stages, but you get the picture).

Glad to hear it!

[identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/la_marquise_de_/ 2009-12-05 12:22 pm (UTC)(link)
With LWG I recall further ones (fail to sell; revise; fail to sell; revise; fail to sell; put in box; reread and hate; revise; sell; revise...)

[identity profile] birdsedge.livejournal.com 2009-12-05 12:32 am (UTC)(link)
It sounds like a win to me.

[identity profile] glass-mountain.livejournal.com 2009-12-05 02:22 am (UTC)(link)
Have I said that I love the title 'Grass King'? I do agree about endings. But then my husband remarked that Lord of the Rings has about half a dozen endings, which is a problem more marked if you see the film.
In fact, a major writerly question must be: When do you stop? How do you know you've finished?
I've got a coronation interruptus stuck on the end of Malarat. Which is mostly fine, up till the end, which is embarrassingly feeble.

[identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/la_marquise_de_/ 2009-12-05 12:23 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm coming to the conclusion that ends are just out to get us.

[identity profile] glass-mountain.livejournal.com 2009-12-06 03:27 am (UTC)(link)
LOL yes!
(exit pursued by an end...)

[identity profile] anef.livejournal.com 2009-12-05 08:10 am (UTC)(link)
I like the Grass King a lot. But you knew that.

[identity profile] saare-snowqueen.livejournal.com 2009-12-07 11:40 am (UTC)(link)
Ah... that answers my question. I was wondering if you had finished it, as you just stopped talking about it.
WRITE THAT LAST CHAPTER!!!!!